Zoe,
Summary and Strengths
You started well this year,
posting regularly and really engaged - your blog has a good quality of posts
that are completed and finished (e.g. generic conventions work) – your idea is also
a good one and will lend itself to a high quality bit of coursework – but these
posts have dropped off recently
You have a lowish number of posts at this stage (which we
have discussed) – the quality of presentation and analysis is band 3 but we
need further research and planning to ensure we get a high R and P mark.
Targets
- Further posts – set yourself blog post targets every week and make progress every week – stay on top of deadlines!
- Research – trailer analysis needs more trailers analysed and each one analysed in detail with subheadings etc – sound, mise en scene etc – you can stick with your chosen genre also now
- Add points to mood board analysis
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